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Heaven [Old-school trance]
#1
I have been working on this track for about 6 months since I couldn't find the right result. At last, here I am, serving You this piece of music! I hope You enjoy and share Your bad or good impressions with me.

What the track contains:




---heavenly choir
-----drums leading to more heavenly choir
-------more drums leading into the most heavenly choir

P.S. Well, I hope You hear for Yourselves...

http://soundcloud.com/brain-claim/heaven
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#2
I am probably repeating myself but here goes. You have very good ideas but I am still waiting for the melody to kick in on your tracks. This is only my personal opinion and you can ignore it if you think I am out of line, but I am still waiting for the melody. The 'punch line' so to speak.
'The purpose of life is a life of purpose' - Athena Orchard.
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#3
Yeah, I know what you mean. I am working on few projects which are based on punch melodies, maybe You will like them Smile
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#4
I would like to hear them - don't get me wrong - I am not trying to knock you - you have the ability to put stuff together - no doubt about that - there's just 'something' missing. The quality/production of your work is good.

Maybe this is a way to look at it - if someone was walking down the street would they be able to whistle your piece to themselves? Start with that and then build your electronic piece around that - just an idea.
'The purpose of life is a life of purpose' - Athena Orchard.
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#5
That sounds like a pretty amazing idea! Since I have always been experimenting more with the sounds than melodies, I was basically technically developing myself. A month ago, I purchased a new MIDI keyboard so finally, I can play proper melodies that are not composed on computer keyboard! Yeah, since recently I had been composing all the songs on COMPUTER keyboard Big Grin
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#6
RIGHT! I knew there was something missing. The fact that you have composed all of these tracks without a midi keyboard is a testament to hard work. I am impressed. The new keyboard is going to unlock melodic potential for you. You are going to have a lot of fun with it. Try recording just a melodic line without any background synths or harmony - then build your piece around that. Just my opinion but I think you will find it is going to lift your music to a different level. Good luck.
'The purpose of life is a life of purpose' - Athena Orchard.
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#7
Thank You! Smile The MIDI is going to change the melodic level of my music. At least I hope Smile
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