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Judge my lyrics, please?
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Yellow Is Everywhere
It's here and there
No one seems to care
As it runs the air

Turn on the T.V.
Yellow is all I see
Covers our ears and eyes
Takes over your mind

Yellow is money
Yellow consumes me
Yellow lies
Give it your dime
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#2
Please explain what you mean by each line.
'The purpose of life is a life of purpose' - Athena Orchard.
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#3
I think they should take the Nobel Literature Prize off Bob Dylan and give it to 1blankmind....just saying?!?!
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#4
you should use a different colour to write about, Coldplay already covered that colour satisfactory IMO.
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#5
Jerome Wrote:Please explain what you mean by each line.

Yellow is in reference to yellow journalism. The song is about the media twisting things to fit an ideology Rather than present the facts indiscriminately.

CRAZY-HORSE Wrote:you should use a different colour to write about, Coldplay already covered that colour satisfactory IMO.

Lol. I wouldn't know. I don't listen to coldplay.
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#6
OK, makes more sense now.
Next question - where's the music?
'The purpose of life is a life of purpose' - Athena Orchard.
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Jerome Wrote:OK, makes more sense now.
Next question - where's the music?

Haven't finished the song yet. Not ready for release.
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#8
I never heard of "yellow journalism". Is that something like purple prose?
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bob_32_116 Wrote:I never heard of "yellow journalism". Is that something like purple prose?

Kind of. Yellow journalism, "journalism that is based upon sensationalism and crude exaggeration."

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