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Just foreigners - producer - 09-02-2016
[video=youtube;tKQVWunlYg4]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tKQVWunlYg4[/video]
Just foreigners - CRAZY-HORSE - 09-02-2016
I like her voice but I don't like the song
Just foreigners - producer - 10-02-2016
Thank you for your opinion
Just foreigners - producer - 10-02-2016
what about this version? [video=youtube;t3fW7-qOpGA]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t3fW7-qOpGA[/video]
Just foreigners - Jerome - 11-02-2016
I agree with CH. She has a good voice but there are too many mismatched samples in the instrumentation. The piece needs real instruments and a complete rethink when it comes to programming the drums and percussion. Especially in the chorus where the 'snare' is falling on the first beat instead of the second. A more defined bass line would help as well. The main thing that is wrong though is the lack of direction in the track. It's a simple verse/chorus thing. There needs to be a bridge or a deviation off the established pattern - maybe a key change as well. You are in the ballpark - it just needs more work.