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Criticism Thread. Need opinions and tips! - Holo - 12-03-2013
Just started writing and rapping a bit. This is the first, conceptual at that, rap song I've recorded. Any tips/criticisms/complete teardowns would be appreciated my dudes.
http://soundcloud.com/saucier-nick/the-resistance-prod-bitboy
Criticism Thread. Need opinions and tips! - JamesBond - 13-03-2013
Holo Wrote:Just started writing and rapping a bit. This is the first, conceptual at that, rap song I've recorded. Any tips/criticisms/complete teardowns would be appreciated my dudes.I think I like it
http://soundcloud.com/saucier-nick/the-resistance-prod-bitboy
Criticism Thread. Need opinions and tips! - Holo - 13-03-2013
JamesBond Wrote:I think I like it
Thanks for the response. Gotta work on my flow a bit.
Criticism Thread. Need opinions and tips! - juliette01 - 14-03-2013
Holo Wrote:Thanks for the response. Gotta work on my flow a bit.
The lyrics is pretty decent. But youve gotta work on your phrasing a lil bit. It will give the rap more meaning if phrased the most effective way.
Criticism Thread. Need opinions and tips! - juliette01 - 14-03-2013
That's just my opinion though.
Criticism Thread. Need opinions and tips! - juliette01 - 14-03-2013
I have some rapper friends from this social media site, might as well ask some opinion from the real rappers.
Criticism Thread. Need opinions and tips! - Holo - 16-03-2013
juliette01 Wrote:The lyrics is pretty decent. But youve gotta work on your phrasing a lil bit. It will give the rap more meaning if phrased the most effective way.
I think I know what you mean. Thanks for the input! Always appreciated.
Criticism Thread. Need opinions and tips! - DiGiMusicLabelz - 27-03-2013
I usually don't respond to people who claim they just woke up and started rapping. But honestly, you are better than some who claim they had an epiphany and wanted to become a rap star. Your flow is decent for a newbie. Which in my eyes means that you might have a God given talent. Being able to rap and maneuver through a beat effortlessly is a talent that is given, and perfected through practice. Lucky you.