03-09-2015, 19:46
For what it's worth I have listened to the piece and this is my opinion.
It is more Tangerine Dream that Jarre, but I think you are cramming too many ideas into too short a space.
You seem to be in a hurry, listen to Phaedra and then re-listen to your piece and I suggest you might have enough ideas for a whole album, you just need the 'spaces' in between.
Tell me to mind my own business if you want, but maybe something of what I've said may give you food for thought.
It is more Tangerine Dream that Jarre, but I think you are cramming too many ideas into too short a space.
You seem to be in a hurry, listen to Phaedra and then re-listen to your piece and I suggest you might have enough ideas for a whole album, you just need the 'spaces' in between.
Tell me to mind my own business if you want, but maybe something of what I've said may give you food for thought.