Heko Wrote:For what it's worth I have listened to the piece and this is my opinion.
It is more Tangerine Dream that Jarre, but I think you are cramming too many ideas into too short a space.
You seem to be in a hurry, listen to Phaedra and then re-listen to your piece and I suggest you might have enough ideas for a whole album, you just need the 'spaces' in between.
Tell me to mind my own business if you want, but maybe something of what I've said may give you food for thought.
No problem - everyone's input is valid. Incidentally there are more sparse pieces to come later on - this is just the opening sequence. And I am not offended in any way. In fact it helps if people say what they really think as opposed to saying what they think the other person wants to hear. I have had a couple of responses from a small group of people and every single one has a different opinion. So the lesson is that we all hear things differently. That's life.
I am also familiar with TD and have most of their albums - the one thing I always found is that they went on a bit too long at times so maybe that's why I change tack quite frequently. Keeps me interested. But your comments are all valid and it will give me food for thought. Can't promise that it will change my mind but I will think about it.
'The purpose of life is a life of purpose' - Athena Orchard.