A good effort Matt. Probably the best that's been posted on the site to date apart from the 'pastoral' thing in one of the threads somewhere. The buzzes and clicks could be from drop-outs when you recorded the audio. Check the audio track without the video and then isolate the problem. Could also be mic setup etc. Will give it another listen tomorrow and maybe comment on the individual elements/mix/production etc.
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