What do you think of this ?

[Jerome]

I dig this. Well structured and well thought out. It's not super-brilliant but it works for me. Have no idea what you are trying to do with the video though???? Vocalist is great!!! Synth sounds are top notch. It's also very catchy - caught myself singing it in the kitchen. Push this one real hard. Has all the makings of a hit. And that's from a real fussy old fart.

Update - gonna buy this. It has just got under my skin.