Once again you have put in a lot of effort and it is to be commended but the only critique I would have of this one is that the sound pallette does not reflect the title. It seems quite dark to me. Just my opinion. And then again you can always just change the title to match the mood. Good stuff. Listen to Vangelis's 'Fields of Coral' To me that piece is like rays of light penetrating through the waves and illuminating the sea bed below.
http://youtu.be/8cwI1nuDxGQ
http://youtu.be/8cwI1nuDxGQ
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