03-05-2014, 08:28
I like some elements of this, especially the synths weaving in and out. The melody aspect of it is a bit weak and indistinct but overall a good effort. The electronic drums need imagination/work. Not good at all. And finally the bpm of any piece is irrelevant. Everyone seems to be obsessed by what the bpm is. Just create the piece that you want to. It does not have to subscribe to a predetermined formula.
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