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09-02-2016, 02:12
[video=youtube;tKQVWunlYg4]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tKQVWunlYg4[/video]
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09-02-2016, 06:44
I like her voice but I don't like the song
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10-02-2016, 20:44
Thank you for your opinion
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10-02-2016, 23:34
what about this version? [video=youtube;t3fW7-qOpGA]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t3fW7-qOpGA[/video]
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11-02-2016, 06:50 (This post was last modified: 11-02-2016, 07:15 by Jerome.)
I agree with CH. She has a good voice but there are too many mismatched samples in the instrumentation. The piece needs real instruments and a complete rethink when it comes to programming the drums and percussion. Especially in the chorus where the 'snare' is falling on the first beat instead of the second. A more defined bass line would help as well. The main thing that is wrong though is the lack of direction in the track. It's a simple verse/chorus thing. There needs to be a bridge or a deviation off the established pattern - maybe a key change as well. You are in the ballpark - it just needs more work.
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