Can you give me your opinion ?

[Nesskins]

Hello everybody !

I'm french, so.. First, sorry for my english !
I come here to listen to you my contest track !
" Ableton Live " made a contest for all users, that's : " What Can you create in one day ? "

So, i participate at this contest, and here is my song : http://contest.ableton.com/tracks/1580

I'll hope you like this song and if you can... vote for me .. ( you had to use a soundcloud account for vote )

The rest of the message in french.. :eek:

J'espère que jusqu'ici vous m'aurez compris..mon but n'étant pas pour moi de demander obligatoirement aux gens de voter,
mais de leur faire partager mon morceau. Cependant, ( à ce que j'ai compris ) le jury fait une pré-sélection des 25 qui auront
obtenues le + de votes.. donc.. autant jouer le jeux =).

I hope that you like/love my song !

Thanks a lot

[Jerome]

Not really my thing but after the initial 'intro' I quite liked that beat and the synth sounds. After that I lost interest because it just all started sounding the same and I was hoping to hear some kind of melody breaking through, but that didn't happen. I think the basic foundation is there but there is no structure sitting on top of it. I hope this makes sense! I am 'old school' so maybe you would be better off asking some of your contemporaries what they think.

[Nesskins]

Thank for the comment !
It's good for me to have many opinion ! I understood all you said, and i'm agree with.
I can't make long sentences... my vocabulary's limited
Thanks again for time you spent, for my song