Do You Have A Good Ear?

[Jerome]

Had a listen to this. If it wasn't for the words on the page I would not have known what you were singing. I find the vocal too indistinct and I think it needs to be slightly more upfront on the verses (brighten it up slightly with EQ - push up the higher frequencies a bit). One point I did notice (only a small thing) - your lyrics use the word 'clown' and 'clock' when you are in fact singing 'clowns' and 'clocks'. Not a big deal but if you want things to come across correctly it's details like that that people notice. The pitch of the voice is fine. The music is not really my thing but there's nothing inherently wrong with it but the mix could be improved upon, especially the vocal. Just my opinion.