Criticism Thread. Need opinions and tips!

[Holo]

Just started writing and rapping a bit. This is the first, conceptual at that, rap song I've recorded. Any tips/criticisms/complete teardowns would be appreciated my dudes.

http://soundcloud.com/saucier-nick/the-r...rod-bitboy

[JamesBond]

Just started writing and rapping a bit. This is the first, conceptual at that, rap song I've recorded. Any tips/criticisms/complete teardowns would be appreciated my dudes.

http://soundcloud.com/saucier-nick/the-r...rod-bitboy

I think I like it

[Holo]

I think I like it

Thanks for the response. Gotta work on my flow a bit.

[juliette01]

Thanks for the response. Gotta work on my flow a bit.

The lyrics is pretty decent. But youve gotta work on your phrasing a lil bit. It will give the rap more meaning if phrased the most effective way.

[juliette01]

That's just my opinion though.

[juliette01]

I have some rapper friends from this social media site, might as well ask some opinion from the real rappers.

[Holo]

The lyrics is pretty decent. But youve gotta work on your phrasing a lil bit. It will give the rap more meaning if phrased the most effective way.

I think I know what you mean. Thanks for the input! Always appreciated.

[DiGiMusicLabelz]

I usually don't respond to people who claim they just woke up and started rapping. But honestly, you are better than some who claim they had an epiphany and wanted to become a rap star. Your flow is decent for a newbie. Which in my eyes means that you might have a God given talent. Being able to rap and maneuver through a beat effortlessly is a talent that is given, and perfected through practice. Lucky you.