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19-07-2012, 10:36
Hey everyone!
It would mean so much if you took a few minutes to look at my music and tell me what you think! http://soundcloud.com/shrouds/shrouds-its-gonna-work Thanks so much! 
19-07-2012, 10:47
Maybe it is going to work, but it does not work for me. As far as I can tell these are just sentences thrown together, without any real purpose or destination. As long as everything just rhymes that seems to be acceptable today. True songwriting is a craft and not something that sounds like it came out of a rhyming dictionary. If the music had some real instruments that would help as well. Sorry - don't like it.
'The purpose of life is a life of purpose' - Athena Orchard.
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