06-09-2020, 01:03
It's pleasant enough - well recorded and produced but the 'motif' of rising and falling notes at the end of the verses and chorus is repeated too much. Needs a bit of variation or maybe a different instrument (maybe a mandolin) to lift it up a bit. Just my opinion. The main idea is fine but it's just lacking a little spark somewhere.
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