Not a bad affort, but I feel it needs a few things to make it more interesting and to provide some variation. A good simple bass line and some unobtrusive percussion/drums (think fleet foxes) and possibly a keyboard swell in the chorus section. The harmonics generated by the acoustic lends itself to a keyboard swell. Nothing over the top, just a gentle swell. Just my opinion, but I can hear these other parts in my head as you are playing. Song itself is pretty good, well structured and cohesive. Congrats. (I see a keyboard/controller in the background of the video - use it)
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